This is such a lovely story, dear author, especially in the way you give real character to the women that good old ACD only considered as plot devices. You've tidied up their lives quite neatly. And I just love this image of Watson:
"His words, marooned on the page without the nuance of his voice and gestures, lose half their power."
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"His words, marooned on the page without the nuance of his voice and gestures, lose half their power."
Well done!