Gorgeous! From this line, "I want to suck an apology into your skin, leave you marked with my regret and grief and base loneliness, proof of the depth of my devotion. " to the end, I was entranced. Simply gorgeous!

ETA: I love the almost stream-of-consciousness style of storytelling you used. It makes the transitions of time and place fluid where another style would have been abrupt and clunky. Beautiful work!