And yes! I'm glad someone else pinpointed my line. I think it was my favourite in the whole fic. I debated doing something else with the ending, but that line had me leave it as it was.
And you're absolutely right about Holmes' jealousy. The whole thing is mostly Holmes being ridiculously jealous and trying to find a reason why the marriage shouldn't happen. Honestly it's about 60% chance there's an actual reason ^_^
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Date: 2015-06-01 03:31 pm (UTC)And yes! I'm glad someone else pinpointed my line. I think it was my favourite in the whole fic. I debated doing something else with the ending, but that line had me leave it as it was.
And you're absolutely right about Holmes' jealousy. The whole thing is mostly Holmes being ridiculously jealous and trying to find a reason why the marriage shouldn't happen. Honestly it's about 60% chance there's an actual reason ^_^